Saturday, April 18, 2020

janzen resecher paper

 The Game Changer- Performing-enhancing drugs.

                              Performing-enhancing drugs: ‘nothing or relating to drug or other substances used to improve one's performance in sports or other activity requiring strength, stamina, etc.” 

(‘performing-enhancing drugs.’’ Dictonary.com.)         

For many years performing-enhancing drugs have been a talked-about thing forever. And how people have always said it is cheating and its bad for the sports world. But in my belief, I say it's not cheating and it's not bad for the sports world. It's in my belief that performing-enhancing drugs should be allowed in the sports world. And how it would help the game.  And, those people that say those things don't understand what performing-enhancing drugs do for the body. It also would help the athletes be able to play the game longer and recover faster. There are a lot of performing-enhancing drugs form Human growth hormones, steroids, blood doping, etc. But where going to focus on the general of how performing-enhancing drugs would be great for the sports world and the athletes.

Threw Throughout the year's people have been talking badly about performing-enhancing drugs. And how they say its cheating and its wrong and its bad for the sports world. But my perspective it's not. It's in my belief that performing-enhancing drugs. Are a great thing for professional athletes. And I believe that performing-enhancing drugs should be allowed in the sports world. Has stated on Dictonary.com (it says that performance-enhancing drugs were first recorded in 1975-1980). as stated in this article (from BMJ British Journal of sports medicine. Has you read the article it states that performing-enhancing drugs have been used in sports ever since they were found). So, it is in my belief that the people that say it cheating it's not. Because the athletes have been using performing-enhancing drugs form decades. They just don’t see the athletes use performing-enhancing drugs. But if those people would look at what performing-enhancing drugs. They will be able to see the benefit that performing-enhancing drugs will help the body of the athlete's recovery faster. also, performing-enhancing drugs can allow the athletes to recover from injuring fast so they can get back to what they love doing. As stated in the article form (medicine at Michigan) the article talks about how they used HGH which is human growth hormone. Which is classified as a performing-enhancing drug. They used HGH to help repair a person torn ACL. As we dive more into this we could see if you allowed athletes to use performing-enhancing drugs for injuries and for recovery it would be a huge benefit for the athletes. Also form the (intra-articular steroid injection for patients with hip osteoarthritis: a systematic review and mete-analysis it states in this article that they used steroids to help people with hip osteoarthritis). As we look at the articles that are listed in the research and read them we can see the benefit for the use for performing-enhancing drugs in the sports world and allow athletes to use performing-enhancing drugs for injuries and recover. You can see the benefit of the uses for performing-enhancing drugs in the sports world. It would help athletes to recover from injuries fast to get back to what they love doing. 

How performing-enhancing drugs would allow athletes to recover fast and play the game longer. As I talk about before as you introduced performing-enhancing drugs into the body. You will see that it will keep your testosterone level at a healthy level. As a result, it would allow for the pro athlete to recover faster in terms they will be happier because their bodies would not be in so much pain form playing for weeks and weeks on end. In therefore the game would be more fun to watch because the athletes would be able to perform at a higher level day in and day out. 

It's in my belief that it should be up to the athlete to decide if they want to do performing-enhancing drugs. Not up to the people are the leagues they play in. Because I believe that performing-enhancing drugs are not cheating, and they are not bad for the sports world. They are just a supplement that allows the athletes to recover faster. And the people that say performing-enhancing drugs are cheating. What they don’t realize is that doing performing-enhancing drugs doesn’t give you instant strength or makes you instantly better. It still takes hard work and hours of practice. Also, you just don’t put performing-enhancing drugs into your body and get better than everybody else. You still got to put in the work to get there. Let's say you took a regular person and dosed them with performing-enhancing drugs. It's not going to make them a professional athlete overnight. Also, performing-enhancing drugs don’t mean you're going to be the best or be a pro athlete. All performing-enhancing drugs do is allow you to recover fast and get strong. It still takes talent to get there. Performing enhancing drugs, they're not a magic pill that allows you to be a pro athlete you still must work at whatever your try to do just because people say performing-enhancing drugs are cheating or they say their wrong. I believe that they are just there to help the athletes recover and be able to play the game longer and keep doing what they love. 

Has you can see performing-enhancing drugs are not cheating or bad for the game like everybody say they are. They are a tool that should be used to help athletes recover and play the game they love longer. and it's in my belief that one-day performing-enhancing drugs will be allowed into professional sports. it's in my belief that people will stop looking at performing-enhancing drugs as cheating or bad thing and see them as a tool for the athletes. As you look at the information that I have given you will see that performing-enhancing drugs would be a great thing for pro athletes. It's in the belief that performing-enhancing drugs would change the sports world for the better. 

1 comment:

  1. Hey Janzen, I think this is a super interesting topic for your research paper! I didn't know much about performance enhancing drugs/what they can be used for and now I know a good bit more about them. I have a few pieces of advice that could help improve your paper.
    1. Don't start a sentence using the word "and". It's better to complete your thought in one sentence rather than in separate ones. If it is a complete thought and can stand on it's own try to find a different word that suits the sentence better.
    2. I'm not sure if the definition is the beginning of your essay or not but if it is, I find it is always better to begin a paper with your own words. I think it's great to add the definition but maybe in the second or third sentence.
    3. Lastly, I think a few times you used "has" when you meant "as". I would just say check those out and make sure you are using the correct one.
    Overall, I think that you definitely got your point across and I know so much more about performance enhancing drugs than I did before!

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